Remains I
It was horrendous-
Imagining it was no real
The grabbing sickened the mind.
It hurts terribly.
Mostly the pride.
It dug deeply
leaving what shouldn’t.
Pulled and pushed!
Enough said.
I was in exile
as it remains.
aisyah, 13.08.08-kota damansara
Remains II
As I drove
through the heavy traffics,
flashing of lights
like thousands of doves.
Was it me or it just happened
that it continuously dampened-
Mauled by the stars,
Fiercely watched by the moon.
Faults were made up,
And I was helpless,
And I let go,
And it had worsen.
aisyah, 14.08.08-kota damansara
3 comments:
what is the meaning of the
It hurts terribly.
Mostly the pride.
It dug deeply
leaving what shouldn’t.
Pulled and pushed!
Enough said.
I was in exile
as it remains.
???
that's for u to figure it out :)
yeah amir the true flavor of a poem is for you to figure out the meaning yourself!
Your poem is so abstract!
I can feel your thoughts by your word!
any hope of become the NEXT
Shakespeare...
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